
The
Hard Facts About Editing
by Jennifer Minar
Whether
you're interviewing for a new job, trying to woo a love interest
on a first date, selling your work on the Internet, or submitting
a query to an editor, you can never make a second first impression.
It's true. It's just one of life's hard facts.
To
sell your article, novel, product, or yourself, you need to work
on that very critical first impression--and a surefire way to
make a bad impression is to present poorly edited work. All the
hours of researching, outlining, and writing are squandered if
the final version of your manuscript is not tightly written and
error-free.
How
can you possibly convince an editor, agent, or customer that you
can produce a great product when there are errors in your queries,
on your web site, or in your marketing materials? I don't know
about you, but I lose trust in what I'm reading once I've seen
more than one error. In some cases (e.g., a web site for an editing
service) even that one error is enough. I think it's careless
and it leads me to wonder if the creator is as careless with the
quality of his products or services.
Okay,
now that we've made it clear that you will be judged harshly by
your errors, let's work on ways to error-proof your work.
Editing
Cures More than Typos. Proper editing cures not only typographical
errors, but also inconsistent statements, ambiguities, poorly
written sentences, and weak word choices. Appropriate attention
to these aspects of writing makes all the difference between a
mediocre piece of work and an excellent one.
Spelling
and Grammar Checks. Standard spelling and grammar checks are
available to you, so use them! Remember, however, they won't catch
everything.
Print
Your Work. Print a copy of your manuscript and whip out the
red pen. Generally, you will find mistakes you weren't able to
detect when reading on the monitor.
Let
It Simmer. Put your manuscript away for a period of time so
that you can look at it later with fresh eyes. After the established
time period, print another copy of your work and again, pull out
the red pen. Tighten your sentences, examine your word choices,
and hunt down any errors you couldn't find before. I find this
step to be invaluable!
Ask
a Friend to Read. It's helpful to have friends look at your
work. They'll see it with a new perspective, which in turn will
help them find things you may have missed. But remember, non-writer
friends may not always know what to look for. Friends may also
be shy about correcting you. You need dead-honest criticism, so
if you feel you won't get it from a particular person, don't ask
him to read. 
Join
a Critique Group. Peer critiques can be a terrific way to
get feedback on your work, and to offer feedback on the work of
others. As an added benefit, you will learn that there's a lot
to gain from correcting others' mistakes. There are many online
critique groups. (One place to look is Yahoo Groups http://groups.yahoo.com/).
Find one that works for you, then submit and critique as needed.
Read
Books. There are many good books that can teach you to become
a better self-editor. Check out a couple of them. Also, make sure
to keep a style guide handy. One good one is Strunk and White's,
The
Elements of Style.
Hire
an Editor. A good editor will be able to reveal hidden mistakes
and will ensure that your best possible work is being submitted.
There are many editors who will gladly take your money, so be
careful when choosing someone with whom to work. Ask friends for
recommendations. If you'd like my recommendation, WritersBreak.com
works with a fantastic and super-affordable editor who owns BookShelf
Editing Services. I cannot recommend her highly enough for editing
articles, novels, or web material. She can be found at www.writersbreak.com/bookshelf-editing.htm.
Remember,
few things undermine credibility as quickly as work that contains
errors. But, on a positive note, also remember that there are
many actions you can take to avoid them.