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Writing
a Page Turner
by Jennifer Minar
What's
going to happen next? You turn the pages as quickly as you can.
Agitated, you read on,
lured by the sense of dread that's pulsing through your veins.
You
don't realize it, but you're holding your breath. Something's
going to happen. Something big! You just saw Jane Protagonist's
fiancé slip something into her drink. But he's deeply in
love with her...or so you thought!
What
did he slip into the drink? And why? What's he up to?
Scene
after scene, he keeps dropping something into her drink, and you're
becoming more and more confused. He's also meeting with a female
colleague of hers in secret. Who is she? Why are they meeting
like this? What's going on? Now he's luring her younger brother
to a upscale hotel, claiming he has urgent news. But he's never
met her brother. What could he possibly have to tell him? What?!
What?! What?!
Has
a book ever filled you with such anticipation? Have you ever stayed
up hours past your bedtime to finish a book? Have you ever turned
the pages so quickly you ended up with a nasty paper cut? Or,
called your mother in the wee hours of the morning to tell her
that she must read that book?
Why
did that book make such a big impact on you? Quite possibly, it
had to do with two things: engaging characters and a carefully
constructed plot. Both are crucial to the makings of a great novel.
Creating
Characters
Your
characters must be intriguing and memorable. But, most important,
they must be worth caring about. After all, if I don't care what
happens to Jane Protagonist, no matter how horrible her fiancé
is to her, how twisted the relationship is between him and the
brother, or how much care the author took to develop a winning
plot, I'll lose interest.
In
his book, Characters
and Viewpoint (Writer's Digest Books, 1999), author Orson
Scott Card explains that vivid and memorable characters aren't
born: they have to be made. And it's your job to make them both
vivid and memorable. If you don't do it, who will?
Use
description to paint clear pictures of your characters. How much
description or the type you use, depends on your writing style
and the genre for which you write, but you must paint a clear
picture for your reader. This is crucial!
Characters should also be memorable. Many times when remembering
a favorite book, you may find that most of the plot is now fuzzy
to you, but the characters--or parts of them--continue to live
inside your head.
Carefully
Construct the Plot
A
carefully constructed plot is also important. Though the element
of suspense is critical only to certain genres, namely mysteries
and psychological thrillers, the element of suspense can deepen
the overall impact of any work of fiction.
The
goal is to create tension from the very first page, to trap readers
in the viscous web of suspense as early as possible, and to keep
them there to the very end. Nancy Kress, author of Beginnings,
Middles, and Ends (Writer's Digest, 1999) writes, "...you
must hook a reader or editor in the first three paragraphs."
Think about it. There are tens of thousands of books available
to readers these days, not to mention other forms of entertainment.
There are also tens of thousands of aspiring writers vying for
the attention of agents, editors, and readers. You don't have
much time to make an impression. Make a good one as quickly as
you can.
Give
your protagonist a difficult goal, then throughout the novel add
complications. Give her a deadline and force her to make difficult
choices. Convince the reader there's no solution; no way out.
Always leave a question in the reader's mind. This will give them
a great reason to continue on.
Prolong
agony. By making life difficult for your protagonist, you'll inspire
anticipation, even dread, in your readers. But dread is good!
Stir readers' emotions whenever you can. Force them to empathize,
to feel. That's what they want! They want to feel sad, angry,
inspired, annoyed, excited. They want to be taken off guard. They
paid for good entertainment; make sure you give it to them.
By
writing intriguing characters and crafting a solid plot, you'll
create a compulsive need to turn the page. They will skip meals,
miss bedtimes, and (though not condoned) ignore spouses and friends
until they reach the answers for which they've been searching.
They'll keep turning the pages until they reach the end.
Conversely,
draw readers in, but don't let them down. Nothing's worse than
reaching the last pages of a book just to find that the ending
is a letdown. Many books do that; don't let yours! Make yours
a page turner...from the first to the very last page.
Happy
holidays everyone!
Until
next time,
Jen Minar
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